Question: Why do writers make changes during revision?
Answer: “Writers made changes primarily for clarity, secondly for the reader, and thirdly for style.”” RE Betza. 1988. P. 213.
Comment: I’m not sure what changes “for the reader” means. For reader comfort? Size of paragraphs? RayS.
Title: “Annotated Bibliography of Research in the Teaching of English.” Ed. JD Marshall and RK Durst. Research in the Teaching of English (May 1989), 208-222.